Category: Writing Skills

Writing techniques that work at every level — descriptive writing, persuasive essays, editing, vocabulary, and why strong writing skills help in every subject, not just English.

  • How to Use Quotations Effectively in English Essays

    Using quotations well is one of the clearest markers of a top-band answer, and not just in Literature essays. Whenever you write about how a writer uses language, whether it’s a poem, a novel or an unseen passage in an English Language reading paper, the same skill decides your mark. Many students quote too much, embed it clumsily and then fail to analyse it. The result reads like a list of evidence rather than an argument. Here’s how to make your quotations earn marks.

    Why PEE Isn’t Enough

    Many students are taught PEE (Point, Evidence, Explain) or a variant of it. It’s a reasonable starting structure, but at IGCSE it tends to produce mechanical writing. “Explain” often becomes “this shows that…” followed by a paraphrase of the quotation, not genuine analysis of it. Examiners see this pattern constantly, and it doesn’t impress them.

    In my classes, students use What, How, Why instead:

    • What is the writer showing or suggesting?
    • How do they do it? This is where the quotation goes, and where you zoom in on specific words
    • Why did they make that choice? What effect does it have on the reader?

    It sounds simple, but it moves students from describing a text to analysing it. The aim isn’t to follow a formula; it’s to build an argument and support it with evidence you analyse closely.

    Short Quotations Beat Long Ones

    The longer your quotation, the less you can say about it. A two- or three-word quotation can be embedded naturally in a sentence and then unpacked in detail: word choice, connotation, imagery, sound, tone. A ten-word quotation is hard to embed, hard to analyse fully, and suggests you’re not sure which words are actually doing the work.

    If you find yourself copying out more than a line of poetry or two sentences of prose, ask: which three words here are doing the most work? Then quote only those.

    Embed Quotations Naturally

    Quotations should flow from your sentence, not interrupt it. Compare these two responses to the opening of Wilfred Owen’s “Dulce et Decorum Est”:

    Clunky: Owen shows that the soldiers are tired. “Bent double, like old beggars under sacks, / Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge.” This shows that the soldiers are exhausted.

    Embedded: From the opening line, Owen strips the soldiers of any heroism: “bent double” and “knock-kneed”, these young men move “like old beggars”, aged before their time and reduced to the kind of people society ignores.

    The second version uses three short quotations, woven into the sentence, and starts analysing them straight away. The analysis sits in the same sentence as the evidence, not in a separate one that repeats it.

    Analyse the Words, Not the General Idea

    The phrase “this shows that…” nearly always leads to a general observation instead of close analysis. Ask yourself instead: why this word? What does it suggest? What would be lost if the writer had chosen a different one?

    This matters just as much in an English Language paper. Imagine an unseen passage describing a city “choking” on traffic. Using What, How, Why:

    What: the writer presents the city as overwhelmed by traffic. How: the verb “choking” personifies the city as a body struggling to breathe. Why: it turns congestion from an inconvenience into something that threatens life, so the reader feels the danger of the pollution, not just the delay.

    One word, fully explored, says more than a paragraph of summary.

    One Quotation, Fully Analysed, Beats Three Summarised

    This is the most important principle. Examiners at IGCSE are looking for depth of analysis, not coverage. One quotation you genuinely unpack, considering word choice, imagery, form and effect, will earn more marks than three quotations each followed by “this shows…”. Knowing which quotation is worth that depth is a skill we practise in every lesson.

    For more on close reading, see my posts on how to analyse a novel extract and how to revise for IGCSE English.


    At Thorogood English, close reading and quotation analysis are practised in every lesson, until they become instinctive rather than mechanical. Find out more about my live classes, or join the waiting list for January 2027.

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  • IGCSE English: How to Write About Context in Literature Essays

    Context is one of those words that appears in every mark scheme and every teacher’s feedback, and is understood by very few students. “Consider the context” is advice students receive repeatedly. How to actually use context in a Literature essay — in a way that earns marks rather than producing a paragraph of historical background that floats free of the text — is taught less often and understood less reliably.

    Here’s what context actually means, and how to use it effectively.

    What Context Is — and What It Isn’t

    Context refers to the circumstances surrounding the production of a text: when it was written, who wrote it, for what audience, and in what social, historical, and cultural conditions. Understanding context helps us understand why a text says what it says, and why it says it the way it does.

    What context is NOT: a separate paragraph at the beginning of an essay summarising the historical period. “Victorian England was a time of great change. The Industrial Revolution had transformed the country. Women had few rights.” This kind of context-dump is the most common way students misuse context — it tells the reader about the period, but it doesn’t connect that knowledge to the text being analysed.

    The Principle: Context Should Deepen Analysis

    Context should appear in your essay at the point where it illuminates something about the text — not as background preparation before the analysis begins. The question to ask is always: “Does knowing this contextual fact change how I understand this specific moment in the text?”

    For example, rather than opening with a paragraph about Victorian attitudes to women and then writing about the text separately, the contextual knowledge should appear within an analytical point: “The description of Bertha as ‘it’ rather than ‘she’ reflects contemporary attitudes to female mental illness as a form of monstrosity rather than a medical condition — stripping her of personhood in language that a Victorian reader might not have questioned, but which a modern reader reads as deeply dehumanising.”

    The context (Victorian attitudes to mental illness and to women) is woven into the analysis rather than placed beside it. That’s context working properly.

    Types of Context to Consider

    Historical Context

    Events, movements, or conditions of the period in which the text was written or is set. This is useful when there’s a direct relationship between historical circumstances and something specific in the text — not when it’s general background.

    Social and Cultural Context

    Attitudes and values of the period — to gender, class, race, religion — that shape how characters are presented and how a contemporary reader would have responded to them. This is often the richest contextual territory for IGCSE Literature texts.

    Biographical Context

    The writer’s own life and circumstances. Useful when there’s a plausible connection to the text, but treat it carefully — biographical readings can become reductive (“the poet wrote this because she was sad”) and miss the text’s wider significance.

    Literary Context

    The genre conventions, literary movements, and other texts the writer was in dialogue with. A poem in the Romantic tradition, a novel following Gothic conventions, a play responding to Naturalist theatre — all of these are enriched by understanding the literary conversation the text is participating in.

    A Simple Rule

    Before including any contextual point, ask: “Does this change what I’m saying about the text, or am I including it because it sounds relevant?” If the contextual information doesn’t actively change or deepen your analysis of the text, leave it out. Context that exists only to show knowledge of the period is padding, and padded essays score lower than tightly argued ones.


    Essay technique — including how to use context effectively — is taught in depth in Thorogood English’s IGCSE English Literature classes. Join the waiting list for January 2027 places.

  • How to Build Your Child’s Confidence in English: A Practical Parent’s Guide

    English anxiety — the belief that you’re “not a words person,” that writing is something other people do well, that analysis is guesswork dressed up as insight — is genuinely common, and it has a significant effect on exam performance. Students who approach English with anxiety write cautiously, avoid creative risks, second-guess their own clear thinking, and underperform relative to their actual ability.

    The good news is that confidence in English, unlike aptitude for it, is genuinely within a parent’s power to influence. Here’s how.

    Talk About Books, Stories, and Language at Home

    Children who grow up in households where language is treated as interesting and worth discussing develop a relationship with words that is fundamentally different from children in households where it’s treated as a school subject. This doesn’t require anything elaborate or time-consuming — it’s as simple as mentioning what you’re reading, asking “did you enjoy that?” about a book, or commenting on a piece of writing you found striking.

    The message this sends is subtle but powerful: language is something we value, something we find interesting, something worth attending to. That message shapes how a child approaches an English lesson or an English exam — whether they see it as a test of something they care about, or a test of something alien to their experience.

    Praise the Thinking, Not Just the Grade

    When your child writes something and shows it to you, or tells you about an idea they had in a lesson, the most confidence-building response is engagement with the idea: “That’s a really interesting reading of the character — what made you think that?” rather than “Is that going to be enough for your essay?” or “What mark did you get?”

    Children whose intellectual contributions are taken seriously — whose ideas are engaged with rather than evaluated for correctness — develop the confidence to keep having ideas, to defend them under challenge, and to take the risks that English exams reward. Children whose responses are primarily evaluated for their grade learn to produce safe, forgettable answers that minimise the risk of being wrong.

    Let Them Be Wrong Without Catastrophe

    One of the most confidence-destroying things in English is the belief that there is one right answer and you either have it or you don’t. This is a misunderstanding of what English at IGCSE and A-Level tests — but it’s a very common one, reinforced whenever students are corrected abruptly or treated as wrong for offering an interpretation.

    Good English education teaches students that interpretation requires evidence and argument — that you can’t just say anything, but you can say many different things if you can support them. A student who understands this is far less anxious in an exam: they know that their job is to argue well, not to guess what the examiner thinks.

    At home, you can reinforce this by arguing about books and stories with genuine openness: “I thought the ending was sad, but maybe you’re right that it was hopeful — what makes you say that?” Modelling the possibility of different valid readings is one of the most valuable things a parent can do for an English student.

    Celebrate Small Progress

    English improves slowly and the improvements can feel invisible. A student who was writing comma-spliced sentences six months ago and has now stopped doesn’t feel the difference in the way they feel when they’ve memorised a new equation. But the improvement is real and significant, and making it visible — “your writing is much more confident than it was at the start of the year” — reinforces the belief that effort produces results, which is the foundation of confidence.

    If your child’s teacher or tutor provides written feedback, read it occasionally with your child. Not to police or pressure, but to celebrate the specific things they’ve improved on, and to understand what they’re working on. This turns feedback from a verdict into a roadmap — and students who understand their roadmap move along it much faster.


    At Thorogood English, building genuine confidence alongside academic skill is central to how we teach. Small groups mean every student feels known — not anonymous — and the culture is one of participation and intellectual curiosity, not performance anxiety. Join the waiting list for January 2027 classes.

  • Punctuation and Grammar for IGCSE English Writing: The Errors That Cost Most Marks

    Every IGCSE English examiner’s report says some version of the same thing: too many candidates lose marks for basic punctuation and sentence-level errors that obscure otherwise promising ideas. The good news is that most of these errors fall into predictable patterns. Fixing them is, in most cases, straightforward — it requires awareness and practice rather than innate talent.

    Here are the errors that appear most often and cost the most marks.

    1. The Comma Splice

    A comma splice joins two independent clauses with only a comma: “The room was quiet, she could hear her own breathing.” This is incorrect. Independent clauses need either a full stop (creating two sentences), a semicolon, a colon (if the second clause explains the first), or a coordinating conjunction: “The room was quiet, and she could hear her own breathing.”

    Comma splices are extremely common in student writing and signal a writer who isn’t confident about sentence boundaries. Eliminating them from your writing is one of the quickest single improvements you can make.

    2. Apostrophe Errors

    Two types: possessive apostrophes (John’s book, the students’ work) and contraction apostrophes (it’s = it is, they’re = they are, you’re = you are). The most common confusion is between “its” (possessive, no apostrophe) and “it’s” (it is). If you can replace the word with “it is” and it still makes sense, use an apostrophe. If not, don’t.

    Apostrophe errors signal carelessness to examiners and detract from an otherwise strong piece of writing. A quick apostrophe check in the final minutes before the exam is time very well spent.

    3. Sentences That Don’t Exist

    A fragment is a group of words punctuated as a sentence but missing a main verb or subject: “Because she had been waiting for so long.” This is not a sentence — it’s a subordinate clause that’s been left dangling without a main clause to attach to.

    Fragments are particularly common at the end of long sentences that have run on too far. Read your sentences aloud — if one feels incomplete, check whether it has a subject and a main verb. If it doesn’t, it needs attaching to the sentence before or after, or extending to make it complete.

    4. Paragraph Breaks in the Wrong Place

    A new paragraph should signal a new idea, a new speaker (in dialogue), a new time, or a deliberate shift in focus. Many students either don’t paragraph at all (resulting in one enormous block of text) or paragraph randomly (starting a new paragraph mid-thought for no apparent reason).

    A useful test: before starting a new paragraph, ask yourself “what is different about this part of my response?” If you can’t answer clearly, you may not need a new paragraph yet. If the answer is clear — “this is a new argument,” “this moves the story forward in time” — start one.

    5. Inconsistent Tense

    Creative writing should maintain a consistent tense unless there’s a deliberate reason to shift. Many students begin a piece in past tense, drift into present tense under the pressure of describing action, then drift back again — often within the same paragraph. This creates disorientation for the reader and suggests a writer who isn’t in control of their choices.

    Choose a tense before you start and stick to it. If you want to vary tense for effect (a flashback, a moment of reflection), do it deliberately and clearly signal the shift. Check your work for tense consistency in your final review.

    6. Overusing Particular Words

    Very. Really. Suddenly. Then. Also. These words are not wrong — but they become a problem when they appear repeatedly in the same piece, signalling a limited vocabulary or lazy sentence construction. “Very scared” becomes “terrified.” “Then she ran” becomes “she ran.” “Also, the writer uses…” in five consecutive sentences signals that the student doesn’t know how to structure analytical prose.

    The fix: in your final check, circle every instance of the five words above. For each one, decide whether the sentence is improved by removing or replacing it. More often than not, it is.


    These basics are addressed from the first session in Thorogood English’s IGCSE English programme — not assumed, and not left to chance. Join the waiting list for January 2027 classes.

  • How to Answer Language Analysis Questions in IGCSE English: A Practical Guide

    Language analysis questions — questions that ask you to comment on the effects of the writer’s language choices — are the most intellectually demanding questions in IGCSE English Language. They’re also the questions where top marks are most attainable, once you understand what distinguishes a high-scoring answer from a mediocre one.

    Here is the difference, stated plainly: a mediocre answer identifies features and names them. A high-scoring answer identifies features, names them, and explains precisely and specifically what effect they create in this passage.

    The Structure of a Strong Language Analysis Answer

    Every language analysis point needs three things:

    1. A quotation — specific words or a short phrase from the text
    2. Identification of the technique or feature — what is this? (metaphor, verb choice, alliteration, rhetorical question…)
    3. An explanation of effect — what does this do? What feeling, image, idea, or reaction does it create in the reader?

    The third element is where most students underperform. They name the technique correctly, quote accurately, and then write: “This creates a sense of tension.” That’s not an explanation — it’s a label. What kind of tension? How does this specific word choice, in this specific sentence, in this specific context, create that tension? The answer to those questions is what earns the marks.

    What “Zoom In” Actually Means

    You’ll often hear teachers say “zoom in on the language.” Here’s what that means in practice.

    Instead of quoting a long passage and commenting on it generally, select a single word or short phrase and analyse why that specific word works — what its connotations are, what it implies about the subject, what alternative words the writer could have used and why they didn’t.

    Take the verb “lurked” versus “stood” or “waited.” All three describe a person in a position, but “lurked” carries connotations of threat, hidden intention, predatory patience. A single verb can do enormous work, and an analysis that notices and explains that work is much more impressive than an analysis that quotes three sentences and says they “paint a vivid picture.”

    Avoid These Phrases

    Certain phrases appear in almost every mediocre language analysis response and signal that real analysis isn’t happening:

    • “This creates a vivid image in the reader’s mind” — almost always true but almost always empty
    • “This shows that…” — often followed by a paraphrase of the quotation rather than an analysis of it
    • “The writer uses language effectively” — circular and meaningless
    • “This technique makes the reader want to read on” — usually a guess, and usually not what’s actually being asked

    Replace these habits with more specific language: “The verb… suggests…”, “The connotations of… imply…”, “By choosing… rather than…, the writer conveys…”

    Selecting What to Analyse

    You don’t have to comment on everything. You need to comment well on a selection. Choose the features where you can say the most — where you have a genuine observation about the effect of that specific word or phrase, not just a name-and-label response.

    Aim for depth over breadth. Two genuinely analytical paragraphs, each exploring a specific feature with precision, will outscore five superficial paragraphs that name five features and say little about any of them.

    A Useful Test

    After writing each analytical point, ask yourself: “Is what I’ve written here specific to this quotation, or could I have written almost the same thing about any quotation from any text?” If it could apply to anything, it’s not analysis — it’s a template. Push yourself to say something that is only true of this particular language choice in this particular context.


    Language analysis is the skill Thorogood English invests most time in across all its IGCSE English courses — because it’s the skill that makes the biggest difference to grades. Join the waiting list for January 2027.

  • Creative Writing for IGCSE English: How to Make Your Story Stand Out

    Every IGCSE English Language examiner has read thousands of stories about car crashes, surprise parties, and characters “waking up from a dream.” These stories are not bad. They are forgettable. And forgettable, in a sea of scripts, means mediocre marks.

    The stories that score highest are not necessarily the most dramatic or inventive — they’re the most crafted. Here’s what that means in practice.

    Choose a Small Story and Tell It Brilliantly

    The most common mistake is trying to fit too much story into a limited word count. Chases, confrontations, revelations, plot twists, backstory — all of these take words to establish and resolve. A story that tries to do too much ends up rushing everything and doing none of it well.

    The highest-scoring IGCSE stories are often very small. A single moment. A conversation. An observation of a stranger. One decision and its immediate consequence. Small stories allow the space to slow down and write with real precision — to notice the light through a window, the way someone holds their hands, the specific texture of a moment — and that precision is what distinguishes a 7 from a 9.

    Start in the Middle

    Openings that begin at the very beginning — “It was a cold morning when…” — lose the reader immediately. The reader needs a reason to keep reading, and that reason is almost always something immediate: a character in the middle of doing something, a question the reader needs answered, a surprising image that demands explanation.

    Start in the middle of the action, in the middle of a conversation, or with a striking image that creates immediate curiosity. The setup can come later — and often doesn’t need to come at all.

    Use Specific Sensory Details

    Vague description is the enemy of memorable writing. “The room was messy” tells us almost nothing. “Three days of coffee cups, a paperback face-down on the floor, and a jacket that had been over the back of the same chair since Tuesday” tells us about a specific person living a specific life.

    The rule: be concrete. Replace general nouns and adjectives with specific ones. Instead of “a car,” write “a red Volvo with a dented bumper.” Instead of “she felt sad,” write what sadness looks like in this person’s body: the way she keeps starting sentences and not finishing them, the coffee going cold on the counter.

    This applies to all five senses — though students tend to rely heavily on sight and neglect sound, smell, and touch. The weight of a bag. The smell of an empty house. The particular sound of a text message at 3am. Sensory details that are unexpected often create the most powerful effect.

    Vary Your Sentence Length — Deliberately

    Sentence rhythm is one of the most powerful tools available to a writer, and one of the least used by exam candidates. When all your sentences are roughly the same length, the writing feels flat — the reader loses the sense that anything is accelerating or slowing down.

    Long sentences can create a sense of flow, accumulation, or breathlessness. Short ones land hard. The contrast between them is where the effect lives. Practise writing a passage where the sentences get progressively shorter as the tension rises — then stop with a one-word or two-word sentence. It’s a technique with almost unfailing impact when used well.

    End Before the End

    The most common problem with endings is that they tie everything up too neatly: the characters reconcile, the problem is solved, everyone understands what they’ve learned. These endings feel false because life doesn’t work like that — and they feel anticlimactic because they deflate the tension rather than releasing it.

    The most effective endings often end one beat before the “real” ending — the moment just before the conversation happens, the image of a character standing at a door they haven’t yet opened, a question left in the air. This makes the reader’s imagination complete the story, which is always more powerful than any explicit conclusion you could write.


    Creative writing is taught and practised in detail in Thorogood English’s IGCSE English Language course — with written feedback on every piece. Join the waiting list for January 2027.

  • IGCSE English Language: How to Write a Perfect Summary

    Summary writing is one of the questions students most consistently underperform on — and one of the questions they can most reliably improve with the right technique. The problem is almost always the same: students describe and copy rather than summarise and select.

    Here’s what summary writing in IGCSE English Language actually requires — and how to do it well.

    What Is a Summary Question Actually Asking?

    A summary question asks you to extract the key information on a specific aspect or aspects of the text and present it concisely in your own words. The question will specify exactly what you’re summarising: “Summarise what the writer says about the dangers of social media,” or “Write a summary of the arguments both for and against the proposed development.”

    Two things are being assessed: selection (have you found the relevant information?) and transformation (have you expressed it in your own words, concisely?). Copying large chunks of the source text, no matter how relevant, does not score well.

    Step 1: Read the Question Carefully — Then the Text

    Before you even look at the source text, read the summary question and underline exactly what you’re asked to summarise. Then, as you read the text, you’re reading with a specific filter active: you’re looking for this information and only this information.

    Students who read the text first and then try to fit it to the question often include irrelevant information and miss some relevant information. The question should prime the reading.

    Step 2: Find and Mark the Relevant Points

    Go through the text and mark (underline, bracket, or annotate) every point that is relevant to the question. Don’t worry yet about the order or how you’ll express them — just find them all.

    Most summary questions have a specified number of marks and/or a word limit that gives you a rough indication of how many points you’re expected to find. A 10-mark summary question typically expects 8–10 valid points. A 5-mark one expects around 5. If you’re finding significantly more or fewer than the mark allocation suggests, re-read the question to check whether you’re interpreting it correctly.

    Step 3: Transform into Your Own Words

    This is where most students lose marks. “In your own words” is not a suggestion — it is a marking criterion. A response that lifts phrases directly from the text will be penalised, even if it has correctly identified the relevant information.

    For each point you’ve identified, ask yourself: if I were explaining this to someone who hadn’t read the text, what would I say? Then write that. Don’t look back at the source text while you’re writing the transformed version — it’s much harder to resist copying if the original is in front of you.

    Useful transformation techniques: change the word class (turn a verb into a noun, or vice versa), use a synonym for key terms, restructure the sentence, and combine two short points into one more complex sentence.

    Step 4: Write in a Neutral, Concise Register

    A summary is not an essay and it is not a personal response. You don’t need an introduction that explains what you’re about to summarise. You don’t need a conclusion. You don’t need to evaluate or agree or disagree with the source text’s arguments. A summary presents the information — that’s all.

    Keep sentences clear and information-dense. Avoid padding: “The writer goes on to talk about how…” wastes words. Just state the point: “Experts warn that…”

    Common Mistakes to Avoid

    • Copying from the source: even a few lifted phrases can reduce your marks significantly
    • Including irrelevant information: anything not directly related to the specified question is wasted words
    • Adding your own opinions: a summary reports — it doesn’t evaluate
    • Summarising the whole text rather than the specified aspect: read and re-read the question
    • Neglecting to check your word limit: if a limit is given, stay within it — going over is penalised

    Summary writing improves quickly with practised feedback on the specific technique. At Thorogood English, every summary exercise is marked individually with written guidance. Join the waiting list for January 2027 IGCSE classes.

  • IGCSE English Literature: How to Tackle an Unseen Poem

    Of all the sections in IGCSE English Literature, unseen poetry causes the most anxiety. The name itself feels like a threat: you’ll be shown a poem you’ve never read, in an exam room, with the clock ticking, and expected to produce a piece of intelligent literary analysis from scratch.

    The good news: it’s far more manageable than it sounds, and the method is learnable. Here is a reliable approach to tackling any unseen poem.

    Step 1: Read It Twice Before You Touch Your Pen

    The biggest mistake is reading the poem once, panicking that you don’t understand it, and starting to write something — anything — just to feel like you’re doing something. Resist this impulse.

    Read the poem all the way through without annotating. Just read it as a piece of writing. Then read it again, this time noticing what it makes you feel and what you find striking. Then — and only then — start annotating.

    Your first impression of a poem is data. Don’t throw it away by rushing into analysis before you’ve absorbed what the poem is actually doing.

    Step 2: Establish the Basics

    Before analysing individual language choices, establish the poem’s essential coordinates. Who is speaking? Who are they speaking to? What situation are they describing? What is the poem’s overall tone — mournful, celebratory, angry, contemplative? What shift happens in the poem, if any?

    A poem without a volta (a turn or shift) is relatively rare. Most poems move — from one emotional state to another, from one perspective to another, from question to answer or answer to question. Identifying that movement gives you the poem’s architecture, and architecture gives you something to organise your response around.

    Step 3: Annotate — But With Purpose

    Annotation should not be a process of circling every technique you can name and labelling it: “metaphor”, “alliteration”, “enjambment”. Examiners are not impressed by feature-spotting. They are impressed by the ability to explain what a feature does in this poem — how it contributes to the poem’s meaning, tone, or effect.

    As you annotate, ask yourself: Why this word and not another? Why this structure? What does this comparison say about the subject that a literal description wouldn’t? What is the effect of the line break here?

    Write your thinking in the margins, not just labels. “The short sentences here create urgency — mirrors the panic of the moment” is more useful than “short sentences = effect”.

    Step 4: Choose Your Two or Three Best Points

    You don’t need to write about every interesting thing in the poem. A well-developed analysis of two or three genuinely significant features will score higher than a superficial tour of everything you noticed.

    Choose features where you can explain the effect in some depth — where you can say something more than “this creates imagery”. Avoid making very general points: “the poet uses lots of vivid language to describe the scene” is not analysis, it is description of analysis that hasn’t yet happened.

    Step 5: Structure Your Response

    The most reliable structure for an unseen poem response: a brief opening that identifies the poem’s subject and overall effect, followed by two or three analytical paragraphs, followed by a comment on the poem’s overall impact and what it leaves you with. This is not the only structure, but it works.

    Each analytical paragraph should follow a clear pattern: make a point, provide a quotation from the poem, explain what the specific language choice does (not just what it means), and connect it back to the poem’s overall meaning or tone.

    What to Do If You Don’t Understand the Poem

    This is more common than students admit, and it’s less of a problem than it feels. You don’t need to fully understand a poem to write well about it. You need to respond to what it makes you feel, explain what specific language choices are doing, and make intelligent inferences about meaning — even tentative ones. “The poem seems to be exploring…” is a perfectly valid opening. Certainty is not required. Engagement is.

    A poem that feels inaccessible on first reading often becomes much clearer on second and third reading. Commit to reading it carefully rather than reaching for a sense of total understanding before you’ve put in the time.


    Unseen poetry is practised extensively in Thorogood English’s IGCSE English Literature classes — with genuine poems, individual feedback, and the confidence-building that comes from doing something difficult in good company. Join the waiting list for January 2027.

  • Teaching Your Child to Love Reading: The Single Best Investment for English Exams

    Ask any English examiner — at GCSE, IGCSE, or A-Level — what distinguishes the highest-scoring students from the rest, and you’ll hear the same answer: they read. Not just textbooks or revision guides. They read fiction, non-fiction, newspapers, novels. They read widely, often, and with genuine interest.

    This is not a coincidence. Reading is not a passive activity — it builds vocabulary, sharpens analytical instinct, expands familiarity with different styles of writing, and develops the internal sense of what good prose sounds like that no amount of grammar drilling can replicate. The students who read for pleasure tend to write better and think more flexibly than students who don’t — and the advantage compounds over years.

    So how do you build a reading habit in a child who’d rather be doing almost anything else?

    Start with What They’re Actually Interested In

    The single biggest mistake parents make is trying to build a reading habit with books they think their child should like — literary classics, prize-winning literary fiction, improving non-fiction. These are not bad books, but they’re rarely the books that turn a non-reader into a reader.

    The gateway book — the one that makes a child think “oh, I want to read another one” — is almost never a canonical text. It’s a funny book, an exciting book, a book about something they already care about passionately. Once a child is reading with genuine appetite, the range and ambition of what they want to read tends to expand naturally. The trick is getting them through the gate.

    Read Aloud Together — Even (Especially) to Older Children

    Reading aloud to children has a slightly unfortunate reputation for being a thing you stop doing once they can read independently. This is a shame, because it’s enormously valuable well into secondary school.

    When you read aloud to an older child — at bedtime, during a long journey, in those odd twenty minutes before dinner — you expose them to vocabulary and sentence structures that are more complex than what they might choose independently. You model what engaged reading sounds like. And you give reading a social, warm dimension that purely independent reading sometimes lacks, which matters enormously for children who associate books with solitude and effort rather than pleasure.

    Remove Competition from Devices

    This one is simple to say and hard to do: reading is in constant competition with more immediately rewarding alternatives. Screens, games, social media, streaming — all of these are designed by people who understand attention and dopamine, and they’re very good at their job.

    Creating conditions where reading is the natural default — a quiet time each evening without devices, a basket of books in the room where children relax, long journeys without screens — makes reading much more likely to happen. The competition is not between books and boredom; it’s between books and extremely engaging alternatives. You need to tilt the context.

    Books Before Bed

    The bedtime reading habit is probably the most valuable and durable of all. A rule of “twenty minutes of reading before the light goes off” — enforced as consistently as any other bedtime routine — will build a reading habit faster than almost any other single intervention, precisely because it creates a regular slot where there’s nothing else to do and a book is the most appealing option available.

    Children who read for twenty minutes every night before bed read for more than 120 hours a year. Over a primary school career, that’s an extraordinary volume of text — and every page of it is building the verbal intelligence that English exams reward.

    Talk About Books

    Children who grow up in households where books are discussed — where adults talk about what they’re reading, share opinions about characters and plots, argue about whether an ending was satisfying — absorb a set of analytical habits that transfer directly to English exams. They learn to form opinions about text, to find evidence for their views, to change their minds when someone makes a good point. These are precisely the skills that separate a C grade English response from an A grade one.

    You don’t need to conduct formal discussions. “What do you think of the main character? Do you think she made the right decision?” at the dinner table is enough. The point is treating books as things worth thinking and talking about, not just things worth completing.


    Thorogood English’s Reading List has curated recommendations for IGCSE and GCSE students — books that stretch and engage young readers while building the vocabulary and analytical instincts that exams reward. Browse it here, and join the waiting list for January 2027 classes.

  • IGCSE English Language: How to Write a Directed Piece (Letters, Articles, Speeches)

    Directed writing sits at the heart of IGCSE English Language — and it’s one of the most rewarding parts of the exam to prepare for, because it rewards specific, learnable techniques rather than vague “talent”. Once you understand what it’s asking for, you can practise deliberately and improve measurably.

    Here’s what you need to know.

    What Is Directed Writing?

    Directed writing asks you to produce a piece of writing in a specific form — a letter, an article, a speech, a report, a leaflet — for a specific audience and purpose. You’re given source material (in the reading section of the paper) and you’re asked to use and transform that material in your response.

    The key word is directed. You’re not writing freely — you’re writing in response to a specific brief. That brief contains everything you need: the form, the audience, the purpose, and (usually) some indication of what content to include.

    The Three Things That Are Always Assessed

    Whatever the specific question, directed writing is always assessed on the same three dimensions:

    • Content: Have you included the relevant information? Have you used and transformed the source material appropriately?
    • Register and audience awareness: Is your writing pitched correctly for the intended reader? A letter to a friend has a completely different register from a formal letter to a council — both in vocabulary and in structure.
    • Form: Does your writing look like the form it’s supposed to be? A speech needs to sound like a speech. An article needs to be structured like an article.

    Many students lose marks on register and form because they focus only on content. Don’t make that mistake.

    Form: What Each Type Looks Like

    Formal Letter

    Include: a return address (top right), date, recipient address (left), formal salutation (Dear Sir/Madam or Dear [Name]), a formal sign-off (Yours faithfully if you don’t know the name; Yours sincerely if you do). Paragraphs should be clearly structured: introduction stating purpose, body paragraphs each with a clear point, a closing paragraph with a clear request or action. Formal vocabulary throughout — no contractions, no slang.

    Article

    Include: a headline, a subheading or introductory paragraph that hooks the reader, clearly structured paragraphs, and (where appropriate) a closing comment that resonates. Articles tend to have a point of view — they’re not neutral information dumps. Make sure your tone matches the publication: an article for a student newspaper has a different register from a piece for a national broadsheet.

    Speech

    Begin by addressing the audience directly: “Good afternoon, and thank you for the opportunity to speak today.” Use rhetorical techniques — rule of three, direct address, rhetorical questions — because you’re performing language, not just communicating information. End with a strong, memorable closing line that earns applause. The register depends on the audience: a speech to a school assembly is different from a speech to a planning committee.

    Report

    Reports use headers and a more formal, impersonal tone. Begin with a brief statement of purpose (“This report examines…”), use subheadings for each section, present findings objectively, and end with clear recommendations. Avoid using “I” excessively — reports tend towards passive constructions and impersonal phrasing.

    Register: The Difference Between Getting It Right and Getting It Wrong

    Register is the single most commonly mishandled aspect of directed writing. Students who can write fluently in their own voice sometimes forget to shift into the voice required by the task.

    Before you start writing, spend 60 seconds asking: Who am I writing to? What is my relationship with them? What do they already know about this topic? What tone will they respond to?

    A letter of complaint to a company should be firm, precise, and unemotional — not ranting. A speech to inspire younger students should be warm and inclusive — not lecturing. A report for a school governor should be formal and evidenced — not chatty.

    Using the Source Material Well

    You’re given source material for a reason: you’re expected to use it. But you’re not expected to copy it — you’re expected to transform it. This means:

    • Taking facts, statistics, or arguments from the source and expressing them in your own words
    • Adapting the information for a different audience — simplifying complex ideas for younger readers, or adding nuance for a more expert one
    • Selecting what’s relevant for your specific purpose — a directed letter about a problem doesn’t need every detail from a source about that problem, only the ones that support your argument

    Direct quotation from the source is usually not what’s being rewarded. Transformation and selection are.

    A Simple Preparation Approach

    Practise writing in each form at least once before the exam — not just reading about how it should be done, but actually writing a full piece. Have each one marked with specific feedback on register and form, not just content. Then practise again, applying the feedback.

    Two or three practised pieces per form, carefully marked and reviewed, will serve you better than ten pieces with no feedback.


    At Thorogood English, every piece of directed writing gets individual written feedback — not just a mark, but specific guidance on what to change and why. Join the waiting list for IGCSE English classes opening January 2027.